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Punk Angel
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since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

0 posted 2001-07-30 07:35 PM

this isnt my best, im just getting out of my writers block!! and its not decitated to neone, so dont ask STACI!!

I am so happy,
I can't believe my ears.
There is no pain
Hiding behid these tears.

I'm so glad you saw
What was standing right in frount of you.
But i hope that this time,
The love you hold is true.

I hope you know,
This is not a mistake.
There is no danger
In these chances you take.

Maybe this time
We will last longer than ever.
But I have to face the facts,
Few teen romances last forever.

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??
~*Krista*~

© Copyright 2001 Krista - All Rights Reserved

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2001-07-30 07:44 PM

this was good except 4 the spelling errors.

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

Punk Angel
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since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

2 posted 2001-07-30 07:48 PM

ok ill look for them, but dont expect me to repost it!! lol thanks gurl for replyin, i think u r the one that helped me putta my block!!

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??
~*Krista*~

cutie2005
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

3 posted 2001-07-30 09:05 PM

Hey this was good!!! Really sweet!
Always,
Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-08-02 05:16 PM

I liked this one. Especially the ending. Well written

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Shygirl82
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

5 posted 2001-08-02 07:26 PM

Great write!! I thought it was really sweet. Thanks for sharing!
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

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since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

6 posted 2001-08-02 11:47 PM

This was sooo sweet!! I really liked this one...

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-08-04 05:02 PM

This was a pretty good poem, Krista! I really liked the last stanza. A lot of truth is in that. Thanks for sharing

I really enjoyed this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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