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Teen Poetry #5

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hopeful
Junior Member

since 2000-04-19

Posts 27

0 posted 2002-02-27 08:21 PM

can it get anyworse
does no one realize what is happening
verbal abuse nonstopping
can't seem to do anything worthwhile
trying my hardest
never pleasing
stressed over everything
my life crumpling down
one place to escape
one place where worry of failure ends
one place where i'm good enough as am
not having to try to be excepted
worry comes back as it nears time to leave
why do i have to come back to the place which is worst

"Be careful who you fall for there never who you think they are"

If you have any suggestions on how to make my peom better it is very welcomed.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-27 09:52 PM

I know the feeling...people dont know how much words hurt.....Verbal abuse is the worst kind....

~LCBS

GREAT WRITE

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2002-02-28 04:01 AM

thats very true...physical blows hurt your body...but verbal ones hurt your heart...*hugs* good read, i just wish things werent so bad with you...

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2002-03-01 12:26 PM

You wrote out the feelings of being verbally abused extremely well, and that is a great way of dealing with it until a solution comes alone.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2002-03-06 05:35 AM

Verbal abuse is the worst in my opinion, cause no matter what it just never leaves you. Im sorry you are going through this. I hope soon enough it stops.

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

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