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Teen Poetry #5

What do you want?

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-03-03 12:33 PM

What’s happened…?
I don’t understand
Before everything was fine...
And now you changed your mind?
What went wrong...?

You said you loved me,
Was that a lie?
I sure hope not...
I don’t want another heartbreak
Though it looks like its coming.

You said you didn’t want to hurt me,
Well good job,
‘cuz you already have.
Just by saying you don’t know what to do,
That hurts the most.

If you love me,
As you said you did,
Then why is it hard to figure out?
If we stay together,
We’ll find out what happens in the future.

If we split,
We’ll never know what we could’ve been,
We could be great together,
Or we could surrender to the problems,
And just give up now.

You know I don’t want that to happen,
So tell me now,
While we still have a chance,
Do you still want this?
Do you still want my heart while its whole?

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-03-03 10:31 PM

Love is full of confusion...::hugs:: your poem was great and you expressed yourself well

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2002-03-06 05:22 AM

If this person questions themselves about being with you its not worth being with that person. Theres someone out there who isnt gonna question being with you!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2002-03-06 02:30 PM

Well it sounds like your going through a tough situation and this poem expressed it very well.I hope everything works out for you and I really love this piece.
Lauren

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