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Dunphy
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since 2002-03-14
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0 posted 2002-04-03 12:16 PM


life people got to evaluate
life you know can be so greate.
we all need all the good stuff
i'm glad i learned negativity to shove.
people watchin us from up above
i know god gace us love.
god sent me from up above
to symbolise a beautiful white dove.
no it's time to be so free
we all got to thank G O D.


                      FROM KEVIN REID
                      AKA DUNPHY
                     18 M MASS
            

© Copyright 2002 Kevin Reid - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-03 02:47 PM


amen to that!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

laconic
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2 posted 2002-04-04 07:45 AM


Good stuff ...uhh...how do u do the symbol for thumbs up?
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3 posted 2002-04-18 04:00 AM



Kevin-
I like the positive attitude in this one.
Nicely said!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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4 posted 2002-04-18 01:32 PM


I agree..the positive attitude was very refreshing. Your right, we should thank god for all he's given us. Loved it kev

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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