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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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This is what I read, When I sit down and think This is what I write In only purple ink. I write my thoughts I write my feelings I write how I want to leave I write my poems I write my letters I write how I don't want to go Purple is my color, My thoughts are rainbow hued, Trying to capture one is bad, cause most of 'em are lewd. I love my British man, I love my Siamese cat I love my dirty rugby ball, I love my rugby hat. Where this poem is going, I truly do not know, I just felt like writitng, Before I had to go. If you think I'm mad, I don't blame you in the least, Cause I have gone crazy lots of times... My uncle lives way over in the East. *sigh* don't ask where this came from... possibly those chips I just ate. I'm such a moron  I am a rabid horse. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
*looks around confused* riiigggghhhhtttt.... Great Poem, I loved it, mostly because it wasnt sad and dark like everything I read and write....anyway...Great Job ~Lisa |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
i liekd ur poem i tohught it wuz funny. you gotts a sence of huma. ur qoutation @ tha end wuz funny too. i hope you come out wit more poemz. i hope more of them will be funny like diss one. i juss put up a poem this earlly afta noon i hope you get a chnace to read it. well i thought i would reply to you cause i think you are a good writta and keep up tha good work awrigh. peace out gurl. from kevin reid aka dunphy 18 m mass. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
LMAO....  Sky, I loved it. It was lighthearted, yet it had layers of longing and desire. It was fase paced, yet meant to be enjoyed as we wish. Truely origonal and unique!! ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 36im a louisiana cajun princess! lol |
i like this one a lot! it speaks a lot even though it says it in few words and though it is light-hearted, it still has a deep meaning in many different ways depending on how it hits you.... good job girl! |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
This was truly very cool. (I think I'm repeating myself... Anyway...) I think the best writing is done when you just write random thoughts, and don't think aobut what you're doing. Generally the writing that results is more honest, deeper, just generally more impressive. I think so anyway. Anyone is welcome to disagree... But a very cool poem. Never argue with a fool. He may be doing the same thing. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rhonda- ROFL! I love this...you crack me up! Thanks for the smile and the laugh.  Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This one was a little out there. That's why I thought it was awesome. I have some of those poems where a bunch of words run out your head and then you look at it and ask yourself if you've been eating paint chips or something. It was definately funny Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This says a lot about you..even though it may have been random it was very expressive. Nice job iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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