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Teen Poetry #5

Fallen Cheerios

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

0 posted 2002-04-02 08:59 PM

Dry uneaten cereal in a dishwasher safe cup
I lay my head on my green corduroy comforter
looking at the dazzling waifs I've painted
While writing a poem with an ultramarine oil pastel
Fear overwhelming the rhythmic beat of fallen tears
A dried pink rose you gave me on my glass shelf
I'm so afraid, so screwed up
Who would want an anorexic?
An anorexic who's afraid of help
I wouldn't want me
Why would you?

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-04-02 09:07 PM

I would want an anoerxic....especially you! This was a great poem, but you shouldnt be afraid of help
Email me

~Lisa

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2002-04-02 10:56 PM

hello m'dear

I really love this because I can connect with it. While we put ourselves on a podium and dance around thinking we're grand, the one thing we want doesn't want us. Many people would want you. Those that don't can't understand and therefore could never accept the being as a whole.

Stay strong, Bel. You're a beautiful person and don't let anything make you think you're not.

~AF~

"Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen

quietlydying

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since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

3 posted 2002-04-02 11:55 PM

'Dry uneaten cereal in a dishwasher safe cup
I lay my head on my green corduroy comforter
looking at the dazzling waifs I've painted
While writing a poem with an ultramarine oil pastel'

classic.

i love this piece.

it's so honest.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-04-03 01:37 AM

I'd love an anorexic

Sweety...dont label yourself by one word..your an extraordinary person which tons of talent. Please dont think so bitterly of yourself..your so many wonderful things

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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