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Teen Poetry #5

I think not

hopeful
Junior Member

since 2000-04-19

Posts 27

0 posted 2002-02-27 08:14 PM

Two people, one heart
Can it be divided
I think not
Loving one, wanting another
Can it be done
I think not
One shows love, one shows disire
Can it be coexistent
I think not

"Be careful who you fall for there never who you think they are"

If you have any suggestions on how to make my peom better it is very welcomed.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2002-02-28 03:35 AM

"Loving one, wanting another
Can it be done"
i had to think twice about those lines...and then realised that you could never be truly in love and ever want another person....good poem, i liked the read

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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