Teen Poetry #5 |
Friends |
Starnite Junior Member
since 2001-07-05
Posts 41Wisconsin |
Friends I've had many friends in my 14 years A bunch in Grafton At 6 that changed...my parents got divorced I moved with my mom I had left all my friends in Grafton To start over in West Allis I met 2 wonderful people: Bobby and Jessica I loved them to death Bobby was like a brother and Jesse was a sister Over those 4 years I met friends Then I moved again Even though it was only 5 blocks I missed all my friends Now I am fond of all my friends here I still keep in touch with everyone from my old neighborhood I miss them dearly Bobby and Jesse I still love you Even though I don't know where you are To everyone else it's great knowing you I love you all and will remember you all. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
aww, I liked this. Great tribute to your friends. It's great to have friends that love you and friends to love. This was a great post, I enjoyed it. Good job! - Cody - |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked the poem...very nice tribute to your friends...enjoyed the read..and hope it stays that way im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a very sweet tribute to your two friends, Sarah. It's hard to move and have to leave your friends, no matter what distance. I liked this poem Keep posting all your work. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I thought it was nice. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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