Teen Poetry #5 |
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Blu2lip New Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 1 |
you are hurting yourself with what you do i know you hurt but its not what to do you say its alright you say its ok but it is what is fading our friendship away Our friendship is very dear to meeh I dont know what I would do without it the only problem is what you do when im not there to get you through through all the strugles of each passing day I tell you what you do is not the way it is not the way to chase your worries away what you did on Friday night was not very smart but I will say this over and over untill it reaches you heart you are my friend till the end and I mean what I say. I will lift you up and hold you together for you are my friend and we will always be together I only ask one thing of you that you stop in your tracks and turn the other way. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is about my friend who is getting into drugs and alcohol and doing dumb things to solve her problems and that I love her and want to help her |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
it's so hard when you see someone you love slip into something evil. I love the poem though. You talked about her friendship meaning so much to you, and i think give it to her. it should hit home with her. Sorry to read this, ALLIE |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I get to be the first to say it. WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! I hope you like it here.I agree with Allie, you should give this to her if you are concerned. Partying every now and then doesn't hurt, but when you take it to extremes you can ruin your life very quick. I liked the poem. You might want to work on the flow. Sometimes you rhymed, sometimes you came no where close. That might have been for effect, but it looked a little off to me. The poem was good though, I hope to see you around some more. "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Heavens Tears![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Welcome to Passions. This was a very emotional first post. I sincerly believe that if your friend is hurting herself, you should at least attempt to get her help. I know how hard it is to reach out for a friend, but sometimes, you will regret it so much more if you dont. Heavens Tears ~ Moderator (Check your email for a special surprise!) |
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tish76 New Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 3 |
this is a great poem. but it hits a little too close to home. my friend has also been getting into drugs and alcohol, so i know a little of what you feel. peace |
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Starnite Junior Member
since 2001-07-05
Posts 41Wisconsin |
![]() ![]() That was sad and good. Yeah I know how it is my friends are like that. And love them to death. Well welcome again and keep posting. **Sarah ![]() |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this piece. You are doing the right thing...Whether she gets annoyed or not, don't stop telling her that you love her and wish she'd stop. Nice first post. I hope to see more. ![]() |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!... ...i can relate in ways...the situation is tough...great job on writing this...as i hope to see you read, share and reply more..bye ![]() [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-19-2001).] |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry! This is a very emotion-filled first post. Very hard situation... I just hope that you don't get yourself wrapped up in that as well. Just be there for you friend... let him/her know that you care. I enjoyed this piece, and look forward to reading more from you soon. ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions!! Great first post and i hope to see you in the future! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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