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Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2001-07-17 11:21 PM

I don't want to turn the page on this chapter of my life.
I don't want to let go and move on.
I don't want this to be the end
and i don't need a new begining,
all i really need is your love
and to stay here in your arms.
Im too scared to close my eyes for fear that i'll open them to find myself somewhere new...
im scared to let go,im scared to move on,
but most of all im scared of losing you....

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-18 12:25 PM

Hmm Jen- I think alot of people are going to be able to relate ot this piece.
Yu did a good job here. I enjoyed it bunches.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-07-18 01:38 AM

Oh wow. THis brings back lots of feelings I had almost forgotten. Nicely done... I REALLY enjoyed this. The emotions are strong, and the way you expressed your feelings was great. Nice work!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-19 01:17 AM

I'm feeling this now. You're pretty much describing my life right now.
I loved this!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-07-19 02:05 AM

such a hard and sad situation to be in...i hope things well...your expression was great!...you did well on writing this, Jen

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

5 posted 2001-07-19 02:39 AM

Very hard situation, I can relate. I really liked this piece, I thought that it was very well written.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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