Teen Poetry #5 |
I dont want to be |
lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
I dont want to be another girl you play Im not like those other girls who you use and throw away I dont need to be played I dont want to be played by you You played all those girls how do i know u wont play me too? Iam sick of jerks and players who lie Just one question to the players, Why? why do you lead someone on to belive something I want more then just a 2 week thing But why in the hell am I wasting my time with someone like you You dont care what it is you do Do you have no heart do you feel no pain? If you play someone what consience do you gain? Im like talking to a wall you dont care about me or my feelings at all You only care about yourself and how your geting by You only care about, "Hmm what will be my next lie?" I dont understand it Not you not it not one bit I dont understand why you put people through all of this and lead them on with a single kiss I dont see how you can live with yourself You say to girls, " i love you and noone else" How can you do this from day to day I know you dont give 2 (edited) about what i say I could care less its like your oblivious to when you hurt someone You think its all games and its all good and fun? Well its not, so sorry to break that to you Your so numb you dont even have a clue Go on playing just see how far you will be You are a player, right now u probly cant see youll grow up mature be a man and get a clue right now you dont relize what it is you do. When you say I love you Dont say it unless you really do Dont say I love you untill you know what it means Dont play me for a fool and say. "You are the girl of my dreams!" Dont Lie to me cause Ill find out Dont say you love me if u have a doubt Dont say I love you untill you know for your self that its true If you lie to me and say those 3 words, and u know they have no meaning, forget it were over im done were through So next time you think of saying those 3 words of trust Dont mix up your feelings of love and lust say you love me if you mean it say you love me if you can commit I dont want to be lied to so dont say I love you unless you truly do. [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is full of raw emotions and truths too. Very powerful poem. You know what? Don't jump into something when you have doubts. Thanks for the beautiful read. keep it up. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this but it sounds like a rough situation. Hope all runs well in the end. Oh and try not to cuss in the poems I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
emotional full of power...i liekd the poem...great job! [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-19-2001).] |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Sounds like a bad situation. Guys can be such jerks... Anyway, hope all works out. The poem was very good, I enjoyed the read. - Cody - |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Sounds like a bad situation. Guys can be such jerks... Anyway, hope all works out. The poem was very good, I enjoyed the read. - Cody - |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Sounds like a bad situation. Guys can be such jerks... Anyway, hope all works out. The poem was very good, I enjoyed the read. - Cody - |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Sounds like a bad situation. Guys can be such jerks... Anyway, hope all works out. The poem was very good, I enjoyed the read. - Cody - |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Aaah! This was another copy of that exact same thing. I'm SOOOO sorry! My computer's being dumb. Sorry! - Cody - Note To Self: If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!! If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid? [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 07-19-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
.. [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-19-2001).] |
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