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bring me down |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571
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bring me down you are spiteful. how can u sit there and lie to my face. you know u put me down, make me feel like a clown. you act like u are so perfect. what a lie that is. we all have imperfections, some more than others. you were a bad influence that is why i stopped comin around. i thought i`d give you a second chance and u blew it going back to your old cruel ways. i will not stand for it. i will not let you bring me down. i will resist. i walk through this darkened hallway thinking of how i withstood the hate, malice, and cruelty. i will not let you bring me down. |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
i think this was a good piece of writting, it really captured ur emotions and displayed them well. I think too many people fall back into relationships with ones they shouldn't, it's good to see u've learnt and are standing up for yourself |
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