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EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

0 posted 2002-09-02 03:51 PM

While you were out avoiding me....
I've been here wishing I could avoid something too.
It is to me what I am to you;
Something that I must get rid of.
You're partly responsible, you know.
Mind you, you aren't the one
Counting the days
Crouched in the toilet
Weeing on a stick
Just to find out if
You've messed up.

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2002-09-02 04:14 PM

Welcome to Passions!

I enjoyed this very much..it's almost humorous but, at the same time, very real. It's not all the time that you find a poem like this one. If you're the one in the situation, I wish you the best of luck...

~Carly

P.S. Check your e-mail for somethin' special.

"My own eyes are not enough for me; I will see through a thousand and yet remain myself..."
~C.S. Lewis

EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

2 posted 2002-09-02 04:26 PM

Thanks.... it's not an ideal situation, but I'll be OK. My poems tend not to scan or rhyme (except Skyline- see that) But I like them.
Eleanor

In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams

anya
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since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

3 posted 2002-09-02 05:13 PM

hey I know that feeling!, but anyway a funny and highly origional first post, hope to see more from you,
Anya

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2002-09-03 03:29 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Glad to see you've decided to join us here in Passions for Poetry. I hope you enjoy sharing your poems and reading others' as well. If you have any questions regarding the rules and regulations, pls don't hesitate to email me or any of the other forum moderators.

Your first post made me think a bit. The last lines did that trick on me. I enjoyed it a lot and thanks so much for sharing. Hope to see more in the future.

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Savage Quiescence
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since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

5 posted 2002-09-03 05:59 PM

Welcome to Passions!

Ouch, a slap of reality here. The raw humor mixed in with the angry sarcasm is just great. Thank you for sharing the piece! And remember, reply reply reply!!!!

A warm welcome,
~Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

6 posted 2002-09-03 08:30 PM

I liked the poem....
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2002-09-03 08:58 PM

Welcome to Passions!!!!

This was definately an original first post and a great entrance into passions. I cant wait to read more from you. Hope you like it here

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

8 posted 2002-09-04 12:25 PM

Thanks people. I never thought people would actually like my whining poems! Will have to do more of them!
Eleanor

In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

9 posted 2002-09-08 07:18 PM

Awesome write, Moonbaby

Your "whining" poems are honest delvings, written well.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

10 posted 2002-09-09 12:25 PM

Perfectly biting attitude. I'd slap him

This was well written...
might I ask how the situation is?

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

11 posted 2002-09-09 04:48 PM

The situation is fine! I don't need no man, lol! And no, I'm not pregnant, much to my relief! Thanks for enquiring!
EleanorMoonbaby

In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams

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