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Teen Poetry #5

sweet surrender

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2002-09-09 12:14 PM

            sometomes i wish i could just fly away from this place
         be free and on my own
         away from this life locked in shackels ball and chain to my feet
          sweet serender take me away from this place
          i want to grow an angels wings and fly over the mountains majestic,the rivers wide, and the hills high
          sweet surrender take me away from this barren desolate land
          take me to the cloudy skys
          sweet surrender

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-09-09 02:21 PM

I hope u guys like this....

quietlydying

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since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

2 posted 2002-11-15 02:27 AM

by any chance were you listening to sarah mclachlan while writing this?

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2002-12-11 10:27 PM

Umm No I can`t say I was..But I do like that song..
*Allison*

"Sorry I`m not home right now. I`m walkin in the spiderwebs so leave a message and I`ll call you back."

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