Teen Poetry #5 |
My Mistake |
HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
My Mistake By Richard Dikeman To travel back to that time and place to past mistakes and pain erase To change my doubt to certainty To tell myself, "she loves me" To take the anger from my heart It did not belong there from the start To change in whom I placed my trust To bring back what I know now The lies and truth and the way how, To see the difference between the two To stop it all from coming unglued For love it was, this I know But faith in her I did not show For her friends and enemies alike Showed me no truth and told me lies Yet it was in them I placed my trust Now in the end it all goes bust Mistrust I showed her blatently That night we ended painfully To travel back to that time and place To past mistakes and pain erase To change the flicker to a flame To fix my mistake and avoid the pain But life continues on ahead Leaving my heart cold and dead Her heart has returned to whence it came Leaving me all but slain. For what is a man without love? After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great write hun!! Truly enjoyed it!! it flowed nicely..thanks for sharing I dont know what anyone is without love... BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Wow, this is really awesome. I loved the way it flowed. Great job. |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Woooooooooow. I looooooooooved it. It floooooooowed nicely. Very articulate. Just a rhyme in time. Great job....Peace man goooooooood bye *Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.* |
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