Teen Poetry #5 |
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Dear God |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
Dear God, I want you to know I need you, especially now I know the Devil is tryin to shake me and I dont know how people are saying you dont even exist if my faith isnt enough than I dont know what is Oh God I saw the smoke, and the rubbel that day That was when Hell came, and God, it stayed The twinz went down and they blamed all Arabs for it Like it didnt shake me at all When those 2 planes hit and my heart, still feels as empty as ground zero the rubbel has cleared but im still searchin for my hero from above we probably look like ants when we crawl we're squished together and plenty and theres no difference at all Between a Black or a White, and Arab and a Jew theres one thing in common We all need you Amen |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
This was extremely well written, and it was a great idea to write about such a sensetive subject in the form of a prayer. Well done on this one, hope to hear more from you soon. EleanorMoonbaby In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Wow, I really liked this, at a memorial service yesterday I shared an email I had recieved, and it relates to this very much. It asks where God was on September 11, 2001, and it answers that very question. God was holding up 2-110 story buildings letting 2/3 of the people escape. God was giving courage to people on planes to stand up for themselves, God was creating obstacles for everyone involved. Only 20,000 out of 50,000 workers were at the towers that day, only 266 on the planes out of a potential 1000..... God was everywhere that day, and it is hard for us to remember it when we reflect on the horror that struck our country and our hearts 1 year ago. Don't ever stop believing... ~Lisa |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Great last punch line layla And it is very important that all of us read input on september 11th from all sides. Thanks for sharing |
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