9/11 ( Deicated to the upcoming anniversary )

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Teen Poetry #5

9/11 ( Deicated to the upcoming anniversary )

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-09-07 01:05 PM

Sun crested one morn
In a hot fall lite sky
As the twin towers held
Majesty would soon die

Unsuspecting people
Stepped on many planes
Loved ones bid farewell
Unaware of future pain

As New York woke up
To a clear orangish hue
Smoke would soon fill the air
As the planes shall crash through

Screams no longer the silence
As the twin towers bowed down
You could hear certain despair
God disowned Americas twilight crown

Flames rose to the sky
As many lives were lost
Surely the terror
Would pay a lifeless cost

He knew what he was doing
Souls brought back to his kingdom
United as one
We are Americas proud freedom

CC Riley Grant '02

~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-09-07 01:08 PM

I just had to post to this although i am speachless. This poem captured the beautiful essence of the towers and your wording was absolutely beautiful. I really loved this and i will read it over and over. Keep writing please!

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

2 posted 2002-09-07 02:21 PM

ok to be honest i loved this poem althought i wish i wouldnt have read it lol ..my dumb prego hormones (sp) are taking over and making me cry lol but i loved this i really did

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*
soon to be mother

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2002-09-07 03:17 PM

Thanx to all of you! I worked really hard on this and glad ya liked it!

Ri

~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

4 posted 2002-09-07 10:59 PM

Well, all your hard work paid off, cuz this is a GREAT poem. It is a wonderful dedication to those who suffered or died on that ominous day... Good Job!

-Rich

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

5 posted 2002-09-07 11:02 PM

Rich- Thanx a lot. Yea we had to do some stuff about it and I thought submitting a poem would be cool since I am a sorta poet ya know. Thanx a lot!

~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~

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