Teen Poetry #5 |
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3 poems i wrote today |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
1) Growing up my feelings i surpressed Always feeling like my life's messed Words of wisdom begun to guide me Soon i'll be who i'm meant to be As things begin to get clearer I feel reality getting nearer Was unhappy with how i was living My mind was confined, trapped in prison Starting to see my destiny I think life will be good to me 2) Now hates just too powerful a word To say i love you might be absured I don't despise or like you Sounds harsh but in reality it's true I don't know you, u don't know me It seems almost to hard to believe I know we've grown apart There's still room for you in my heart We need time to fix the wrong Doing that we could move on 3) Just finished talking to you Your words changed my point of view Is our friendship really true Do u really care for me, as i do for you I feel as if i've been blessed My deepest thoughts to you i can confess Just know for you i'd do the same When u need to talk, regardless the pain I'll be there right beside you For no other reason than i care for you Those are the 3 poems i wrote today, i'm especially proud of myself as the 3 combined took no longer than 20 minutes. well i hope u enjoy the read, hopefully it wasn't to long, and i look forward to any responses, thank you for reading. |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
well i liked the second one the best, not quite sure why, but wow three poems in twenty minutes, I would be lucky to write three lines in twenty minutes |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
that 2nd poem took me literally 2 minutes to write. i don't know where it came from, i just had like this weird feeling in my head, and i ran and got a pen and paper, started writing and it just all came out. it was weird. |
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