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ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
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0 posted 2002-09-07 03:10 AM


1)

Growing up my feelings i surpressed
Always feeling like my life's messed
Words of wisdom begun to guide me
Soon i'll be who i'm meant to be
As things begin to get clearer
I feel reality getting nearer
Was unhappy with how i was living
My mind was confined, trapped in prison
Starting to see my destiny
I think life will be good to me


2)

Now hates just too powerful a word
To say i love you might be absured
I don't despise or like you
Sounds harsh but in reality it's true
I don't know you, u don't know me
It seems almost to hard to believe
I know we've grown apart
There's still room for you in my heart
We need time to fix the wrong
Doing that we could move on


3)

Just finished talking to you
Your words changed my point of view
Is our friendship really true
Do u really care for me, as i do for you
I feel as if i've been blessed
My deepest thoughts to you i can confess
Just know for you i'd do the same
When u need to talk, regardless the pain
I'll be there right beside you
For no other reason than i care for you


Those are the 3 poems i wrote today, i'm especially proud of myself as the 3 combined took no longer than 20 minutes. well i hope u enjoy the read, hopefully it wasn't to long, and i look forward to any responses, thank you for reading.

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anya
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
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1 posted 2002-09-07 03:31 AM


well i liked the second one the best, not quite sure why, but wow three poems in twenty minutes, I would be lucky to write three lines in twenty minutes
ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 128

2 posted 2002-09-07 02:46 PM


that 2nd poem took me literally 2 minutes to write. i don't know where it came from, i just had like this weird feeling in my head, and i ran and got a pen and paper, started writing and it just all came out. it was weird.
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