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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2002-09-06 02:49 PM

Pitter, pitter, patter against the window pane
slightly chilled air in a Summer's night rain
Soft, fresh ground covered with leaves
Thinking of you tonight... I weep.

        Waiting for you... the day you will return
        Oh, how it was too late by the time I learned
        that your love for me, since then, has been lost
        without telling me... and I never thought.

Pitter, pitter, patter lightning and thunder cloud,
raindrops falling, hostile winds howl
Then the night passed by... here comes the morning sun
Beginning the new life (or refining the old one).

        Searching for a lost soul or following your own dream
        keep some room for disappointment as unexpected as it seemed
        Never be too late to start it all over
        'cause life goes on, forget or be remembered.

Beyond the darkest cloud the sun shines bright
Hold onto your dream... positive insight
Pitter, pitter, patter after the falling rain.
Failure is a lesson to learn... it brought my whole life back again.

_____________________________

i wrote this for my friend to give to someone

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*
soon to be mother

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2002-09-06 10:25 PM

Well, it's nice to see a familiar face 'round here! I've been gone for too long... glad to see you stuck around though! This is such a sad, yet hopeful poem, I like it! Glad to see you write better than ever. Well, I'll see you around!

-Rich

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-09-07 01:14 PM

I`ve been reading your stuff and you are one of my favorites here! Your poetry is so beautiful. I really enjoy it. Keep `em comin.

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

3 posted 2002-09-07 02:15 PM

you guys are great~!

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*
soon to be mother

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