Teen Poetry #5 |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
My lifestyle I'm trying to adjust It's hard for me to open up and trust I'm plagued with my own insecurities To overcome them is a challenge for me I'm starting to realize, there are ones who care Through thick and thin, i know you'll be there For that i am eternally in your debt You are the friends i will never forget Your alternate views, make me versitile The very thought of u makes me smile Give me some time, I promise a change It's for me, i can't stay the same I've got voids that need to be filled My negative thoughts must be killed To become a better person is my mission What i've been through made that my decision So when I need you, and u need me We got each others back, that's clear to me I hope it's just as clear to you To those who are there Thank You! |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
This is a really good poem. Your writing shows much talent. I enjoyed this poem a lot. Your Friend Kellie |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
this was a really sweet poem, enjoyed it very much, hope you show this to those great friends of yours! anya |
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