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Teen Poetry #5

absence

wes
New Member

since 2002-08-30

Posts 6
San Clemente, CA

0 posted 2002-09-03 02:00 AM

this is a museless musing,
a lemon-lime taste in sweet sunset air.
or echoes from an empty ocean,
off of all those impossible in-betweens.

this is a coloring book melody
of miniscule grandeur,
where staff lines meet orange and blue,
and rhythm is pushed by tonal hue.

this is a lonely moon in the sky,
crowded with brushstroked-silver clouds
over black waves,
tipped white.

This is time wasted
and thoughts lost
on the return of the long wanted.
but.. perhaps absence is the key

-r

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

1 posted 2002-09-03 11:36 AM

this had a lovley quality to it, not quite sure what, I enjoyed some of the images you have created here,
anya

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