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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571
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devine sometimes the pain hurts so bad i can`t take it all in what people say and do doesn`t seem to bother you it makes me ache inside so bad an it makes me cry and be sad the words they say the things they do makes me wanna cry all night with you but i plaster on that fake little smile and the things they think all the while are so crazy "oh she`s so luck,so perfect" "i bet she`s got it all" i don`t think so why don`t you step into a day of mine because i promise you it`s not devine |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
WELCOME 2 PASSIONS!!! this was a great first post, i hope 2 see more from you.  ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
hey you~ Great poem... but I just had one thing tingy that i was thinking... Which would you rather have... People to think that your life is perfect... or to think that your life sucks and say horrible things about you..? Just wondering.. ttyl ~sara |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
How about this - who gives a damn what people say? Screw'em. I know it's hard to be misunderstood, but we all are to some degree. The important thing is to understand yourself. Welcome to Passions. Enjoy. Jaime "you don't need one of these to let me inside of you" T.A. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
thanks you guys. and i guess your right sara. thanks again. |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS~! and i really cant wait to read more of you work that was aswome i really liked it .. keep up the good work *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I was hoping to find more of your poetry, yet was disappointed that I only found this ... but what I wasn't disappointed with were the words and feeling, I've become familiar with while reading this piece again. Hope you post more.. ~Sara |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
Great poem and forget what they're saying they don't know what your life is really like. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
first of all WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! it's happy to see new members in here all the time. We get pretty excited for you for we know you will definitely love this place as much as we all already do. I hope you enjoy your stay here always. So, happy posting and happy reading too. And by the way, if you have any questions considering the rules and regulations, please don't hesitate to email me. again Welcome... Secondly, you poem is short but has so much meaning to it. I can already see that you'll be a great addition to this community. Keep sharing ps, pls check your email là où est mon amour? |
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