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ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
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0 posted 2002-09-09 01:59 PM



For an eternity i could sit and stare
To your beauty there's nothing to compare
Not a sky full of stars or the sun setting over the sea
Flawless in every aspect, perfect as can be
In a daze from your enchantment
What i said, every word i meant
An angel of pure beauty
A personality that really moves me
As i begin to sit and stare
Know that i'll always be there
Your are the one I adore
A relationship I'd love to explore

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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
1 posted 2002-09-09 04:02 PM


good job. i liked this one.

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

2 posted 2002-09-09 04:17 PM


   this is a really good poem.i really liked it. the title captured my attention. good job!
          allison

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