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Giving up a drug, who will be there?
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Giving up a drug, who will be there? |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
Though I'm realizing my mistakes I've never liked anyone fake At least that's what i always thought All this time i've been distraught In search of amends Realizing i don't know my own friends Not who i thought, as i was deceived Appears i've been blinded by weed This lifestyle isn't what i need Friends cause we get messed up Not anymore, i've had enough Time to see who my real friends are If none i'll stand alone, as a shinning star A journey i'm about to embrace No longer will I live in disgrace I know i will walk alone Though I need to do this on my own These steps i take prepare for friends to leave It's the only way i'll maintain composure at ease Giving up all i've ever known Few friends will be there with love shown Time has come for me to do this To succeed is my only wish As i let go, i recollect on the good times But know that now this life is finally mine |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
Well, i liked this poem alot... i dont really know how to explain it .. but i can honestly say i know what your going threw expet mine was a different drug i had a problem with. i have been clean 10 months .. WOOT .. well if youever need someone to talk to or a friend I am hear please remember that .. *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
wow really hard thing to do! But stilll a very positive thing(I'm not anti drug i just know how it can take over). Hope yu have people to support you through it. great poem by the way, nicely written. |
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Tiger Junior Member
since 2002-08-18
Posts 24Queensland, Australia |
How can you people who have replied automatically think that this person is the person the author is talking about? COME ON PEOPLE, it could be a real or fake person, a friend, or someone she saw on jenny jones or jerry springer. You have no right automatically pressume that this person is the culprite and needs the help. Some people just write how they see society, thats how they get their stories and poetry. Think outside the square you live in. --------------------------------------------- Btw i really liked this poem, it is awesome. I congratulate you on ur outstanding work.  -Tiger ~*I'm not deaf, I'm just ignoring you*~ |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
Tiger .. im not trying to be mean but each person see poetry different .. we might see it as that person is going threw something very hard and you might see it as tho it is someone else they are trying write about.. LOl but either way once again I loved this poem *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey you--if they don't understand? They never were your friends.  Much luck to you--with my admiration for your wisdom and strength.  Be true to YOU. |
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Buttafly_Kiss New Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 3Tx, USA |
I am going through the same thing right now but I've been doing good for a month all of my friends respect my decision and are happy for me a lot tease me and say I'm makin a mistake but I feel it's for my best! Thanks for sharing I totally felt what you wrote! GREAT JOB! |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
I would like to thank all of u for ur responses, i'm fairly new to this poetry thing, i started less than a month ago, though i am currently on my 40th poem, i guess i got lots to write about, lots on my mind. And for tiger, i would like to say that this poem is about me, not about how i see anything or nothing like that, this is what's goin on with me right now. |
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