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MissunderstoodGrrl
Junior Member

since 2002-08-24

Posts 27
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-08-28 11:29 AM

My heart is weeping for you tonight
Cause tonight you are nowhere in sight
It broke my heart when you said goodbye
You walked away and i started to cry
Two months has felt to me like two years
I'll see you again but it will only bring more tears
The loss of your friendship has brokem my heart
With no sign in sight for a new start
A new year, a new life without you by my side
This all makes me want to run away and hide
For i have never loved someone like this
From you i wish for just one kiss
its breaking my heart but im saying to you goodbye
its now my time to fly
I'l miss you forever
Maybe one day we'll be together
I'll love you always
You've changed me in so many ways
I'm telling you i love you as i sit here and cry
I LOVE YOU and goodbye

-:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world
Have you forgot about me?-:¦:-

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

1 posted 2002-08-28 11:44 AM

oh I'm sorry that you are feeling bad but I can relate to this poem, i just had to dump my boyfriend, it's hard but sometimes it just has to be done, anyway i like this alot thankyou,
anya

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

2 posted 2002-08-28 08:02 PM

This is very emotional. I think it could be a bit better if you tended to the syllables, other than that, you did a good job. I hope you continue writing. Keep your head up, things will get better.

~Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

3 posted 2002-08-29 12:45 PM

aww i had a relationship like this

i know youve probably heard this alot, but if its meant to be it will happen

keep your chin up

*Kiley

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2002-08-29 07:37 PM

i agree with everyone above ^^^ and u may have heard this b4, but i could seriously relate 2 this, i recently had a relationship like this and i will miss it deeply, well good write, later~

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

MissunderstoodGrrl
Junior Member

since 2002-08-24

Posts 27
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2002-08-30 02:12 PM

thank you all so much for your nice comments..they all mean the world to me..it shows that i should keep writing and it gives me more reason to write..thank you all so so much
~Tiffany~

-:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world
Have you forgot about me?-:¦:-

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