Teen Poetry #5 |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
you are ridiculous an arrogant fool, and pretentiously cocky you're odorous ( smells like funk ) and your smile is not that charming ( glad i saw the light) your obsession with yourself is just a manifestation of your cowardice you're afraid they'll find out your shining armor is just aluminum foil fake as hell just like you |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Ha! I'm soooo feeling that right now..weird how I was about to write this really cruel poem about this guy, and you so hit a nerve there with the shining armour bit!!!! Loved it!! Kristen |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
that sums up every boy at my school....every single boy....hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha...I'm laughing at our misfortune....I've had a bad day and I think that your poem expressed it very well ~LCBS |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Whoa!!! This was powerful stuff! Awesome poem! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
wow... angry stuff. Very well written, though. Lots of passion. I like that. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW!!! Sounds like someone really hurt you...But sounds like alot of people I know...Great piece!!! ~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~ |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
now this one is about a guy that I know. (and, yes, he smells like funk) Manisha manisha manisha, now hes not all that bad!!! cmon! give the smelly man a break God alone is alone. Man is not. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ooooooooh i liked that part that went "(smells like funk)" a lot. this is a great poem from you mani...im going to look forward to reading more from you btw..are you indian? My england is goodly- are you strudable? |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
hey there- I wrote this poem a long time ago. however, thanks to everybody that responded. and yes, I am Indian. ![]() |
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