Teen Poetry #5 |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
No longer is your relationship pure Unfortunatly there is no cure What's done is done, no goin back Shouldn't have been so quick to hit the sack Left with a relationship that's tainted A new image that's permanently painted A step in a mature direction, was it beneficial Will it affect our relationship and create something artificial Time has passed, sit and reflect Take your thoughts and recollect Since that night nothings been the same Our relationship has become nothing more than a game You probably think, your pretty clever Not in it for love, just pleasure Too immature to have made that decision To fix our mistakes is our new mission It will take some work and wishing If only we stuck to just kissing That's my new poem i just wrote, i am looking for some feedback, so if anyone's got anything to say please let me know, thanx to all who read this. |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked this a lot and it pretty much is what my old relationship was like. Thnxs for the awsome read. ![]() I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call, |
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