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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
My feelings for you are transforming, from love to hate, you have melted and twisted something beautiful, into a disgusting, disfigured mess which I can't seem to look away from. Your betrayal has hit me so hard I can't seem to catch my breath, and how I wish you had left me swimming in my pool of ignorance and innocence, but your confession dragged me out and left me there, wet, cold and shivering in the bitter night air, the harsh winds of truth stinging my skin. And you saying 'it meant nothing', is not going to ease my anguish, and your eloquent apologies are not extinguishing the flames of my anger, and now I know nothing can be the same, your beauty will be forever tainted, my memories forever discoloured, no longer can I be consouled by your eyes or by the touch of your hand, now just leave me alone, so i can heal the hurts you have inflicted upon me [This message has been edited by anya (08-25-2002 06:57 PM).] |
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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
Wow, I loved the last line of that. It's kinda stuck in my head now. I liked this, and unfortunately, I think me and alot of other poeple can relate to it. Love: ~*~Brittney~*~ xoxo |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
"It meant nothing." Well, sadly enough, for many teenage males, a relationship with another girl doesn't mean much to them, aside from the, ahem, physical aspects of it. Wow, this guy sounds pretty cold. Man if I had a nickel for every time I witness or heard about a girl being treated like a piece of garbage.. well.. damn id have a whole bunch of nickels!! |
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