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Smiles and Cries
Junior Member

since 2002-08-23

Posts 16
Newrk De

0 posted 2002-08-24 11:59 PM

I want to Scream!!!!
but I cant disturb the peace of your perfect home
I want to cry!!
but I cant bother them with my emotions
I want to break something!!
but I dare not hurt one of your precious posessions
I want to get out of here~
but I cant abandon my family
I want revenge~
but who to kill, so many options...
I want to die~
but I cant leave them alone
I want to Scream!!!
but I cant do anything i want to do, can I?

Have u ever Loved somebody so much it makes u cry? Have u ever needed something so bad u cant sleep at night? Have u ever tried to find the words but

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

1 posted 2002-08-25 06:29 PM

this is loaded with emotion and I hope that putting those feelings down in words helped get them out of your system, I think we all feel a bit like that at times, in fact tonight I could do with a really good scream!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2002-08-25 06:36 PM

ditto with Anya^^^

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

3 posted 2002-08-25 07:17 PM

Hi!
I loved this poem too!!!Your REALLY good at writing...And i hope that those feelings are almost all gone...
Because there's no piont if living if all your going to do later is regret!

Well i gotz to go...BYES!

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

4 posted 2002-08-26 02:18 AM

Those feelings are horrible... When something's wrong, but there's no right way to solve the problem and make yourself feel better about things. You showed the emotion very well. Very good write, I enjoyed it.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-08-26 03:50 AM

Smiles and Cries-
Wow...you've done an excellent job of expressing
some very painful emotions.
Very powerfully penned.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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