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Smiles and Cries
Junior Member

since 2002-08-23

Posts 16
Newrk De

0 posted 2002-08-24 12:01 PM

When last did i laugh
without telling a lie?
When last did i hope
when not hoping to die?

When last did i feel
without feeling an ache?
When last did i love
when not fearing heartbreak?

When last did i think
without thinking of death?
When last did i dream
not of my final breath?

When last did i smile
Without wanting to cry?
When last did i live
when not wanting to die?

Have u ever Loved somebody so much it makes u cry? Have u ever needed something so bad u cant sleep at night? Have u ever tried to find the words but

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2002-08-24 01:11 AM

wow i really like this one great first post hope to see more. plz check your email for a special greeting.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2002-08-24 11:27 AM

Welcome to the blue pages, Brittany.

I hope you enjoy it here as much as we all do...This was a well-expressed poem, one (unfortunately) that I can relate to sometimes. I sincerely hope that you can experience the odd-numbered lines without the even-numbered ones soon. Hang in there.

~Carly

"Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions."
~David Borenstein

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

3 posted 2002-08-24 01:46 PM

Welcome, Brittany! (I like your screen name.) I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling this way. You expressed your feelings very well in this poem. I remember the times I felt this way too. Hang in there! Once again, welcome!

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2002-08-25 06:43 PM

Wow, this was a great 1st post and i really liked this. awesum job. its goin in my library

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

5 posted 2002-08-25 07:12 PM

HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I heard that your new at pip and i'd like to say WELCOME TO PIP!!!!!!!!!!!!
And now back to the poem...
I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!
My friend feels this right now...I hope he does feel better....
And i also hope you feel better too!!!!!!!

Well i know how you feel...I definitly felt thi way about myself...But i never told anyone I just kept my feelings hidden...
And every now and again i feel like there's no point in living...But enough of that...
Hey Brittany...If you do wanna be my friend i'll give you my e-mail adress!!!!!!!!!!!
Okays byes!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-08-26 12:28 PM

I really enjoyed this and hope you find a receptive home here.

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

7 posted 2002-08-26 01:52 PM

wow, this was...amazing, it flowed really well
anya

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