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I'm Better than that |
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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
I don't think this flows that well but I had to get it out somehow. ~*~Brittney~*~ I'm Better than that I'm done taking your [edited] But I'm not fighting back I'm letting you win Because I'm better than that. It's people like you Who make me glad i'm like me No matter how much you put me doen Like you is something 'll never be. I used to care what you thought And I wanted your respect But now I know I'm better than that And wasting my time on you I regret. no matter how much you think it You're no better than me And allthough you're gonna hate to hear it It's people like you I pity.... [This message has been edited by Acies (08-22-2002 09:55 AM).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's good to see someone does fight back and realize things can be better for them. Just make sure you don't end up like them  Thanks for sharing, keep it up là où est mon amour? |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
HI this is a great, and very strong poem...Very good I like it! K, I don't get why you edit a word when it's written like s****? Why...the word's not even written! just wondering! Best Wishes, Brian. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Because in the guidelines, astrics can not be used to replace letters in a curse  Good Job, you are better than that, and its great that you can realize it! ~Lisa |
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