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Teen Poetry #5

Right Here Right Now

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-08-21 03:25 AM

"Right Here Right Now"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
With all these tears raining from my eyes
Stillness of heart is my one savior,
While another crazy dream is gone
For I'm missing you it's such a blur...

Chorus
Cuz every part of my body's longing for you,
Oh Rachel without you I feel so blue.
I wish you were right here right now...
And your beautiful name keeps pushing through,
Oh Rachel honey if only you knew.
I wish you were right here right now...

Verse 2
Rachel darling when you coming home?
Cuz I'm so lost within these four walls,
And I listen to your favorite song
E-ve-ry night 'for the curtain falls...

Chorus

Bridge
Feel like my bridge has burned,
Feel Like my luck has turned.
And my flame is dying,
Oh I'm really trying.
But it's so hard without you...
Rachel...Rachel....

Chorus

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-08-21 05:32 PM

Sweet but sad.

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2002-08-22 02:16 PM

I agree with Beth: sweet but sad!! I wish I could hear the music to this!! It was written very well!!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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