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Nazera29
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since 2002-08-14
Posts 34
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-08-15 02:15 AM



I open my textbook

And see you between the helixes

Sprawled naked in the margins

Beckoning from the paragraph

I turn your page,

But in spite of myself and Biology,

I decide to join you

I jump onto the white sheets

And let you teach me, firsthand.





This is my first post. I'm a little nervous

*We are the hero in our own story*

© Copyright 2002 Jessica - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
1 posted 2002-08-15 02:21 AM


Ok first things first...Jess is the coolest girl in the whole world!

I like your subject for this poem, very creative, most people can't put emotion into Biology. But what do I know, I dont take it until next semester.  Welcome to our home away from home...and it is just like home.  Complete with the bickering and the late night taboo playing "blank if you're...."

Anyway, good job!


~Lisa

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
2 posted 2002-08-15 03:02 AM


hey,
you seem to be quite good at metaphors. lol i'm glad you find amusement in biology =) i think this is probably the first poem i've read here that mentions it.  thanks for the interesting read.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

punkrockerrobin
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since 2001-05-15
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Sparks, NV
3 posted 2002-08-15 04:41 AM


*shudders* memories of freshman year in biology man that was so long ago i'm getting old!! lol anyways great poem welcome to pasions please check your email for a special greeting.
robin

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

anya
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
London, UK
4 posted 2002-08-15 05:58 AM


this was very original, enjoyed it
anya

Otaku
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since 2002-08-13
Posts 39
Western Australia
5 posted 2002-08-15 06:00 AM


hey howzitgoin...

Your poem was different and that's probably why i enjoyed it..

You've inspired me to write a poem about Calculus....thought you'd like to know..

Cheers

Kevin
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6 posted 2002-08-15 02:00 PM


I read this first :P

its still awesome

Nazera29
Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34
Connecticut
7 posted 2002-08-15 02:25 PM


thanks for all the kind words.... i feel very welcomed thanks kev and lis!

*We are the hero in our own story*

paper doll
Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133
Floating on Uncertainty
8 posted 2002-08-16 09:37 AM


Welcome, Welcome.

Quite the unique first post. I liked it. Biology is such a pain in the ass unless you're doing nutrition and have a few...things wrong with you.

Enjoy it here and don't forget to reply as well as post.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

Purple Poet On Wheels
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since 2002-06-21
Posts 145
Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA
9 posted 2002-08-21 04:03 PM


THAT WAS INCREDIBLE
I LOVE IT!

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 495
East Haddam, CT
10 posted 2002-08-22 02:29 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!   What a great first post!! Between this, and your other piece "Directions" that I just read, I'd say you've got a really unique style of writing.  I almost didn't read this because of the title "Biology" (yuck, lol) but I'm glad I did.  Keep posting!!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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