Teen Poetry #5 |
Biology |
Nazera29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34Connecticut |
I open my textbook And see you between the helixes Sprawled naked in the margins Beckoning from the paragraph I turn your page, But in spite of myself and Biology, I decide to join you I jump onto the white sheets And let you teach me, firsthand. This is my first post. I'm a little nervous *We are the hero in our own story* |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Ok first things first...Jess is the coolest girl in the whole world! I like your subject for this poem, very creative, most people can't put emotion into Biology. But what do I know, I dont take it until next semester. Welcome to our home away from home...and it is just like home. Complete with the bickering and the late night taboo playing "blank if you're...." Anyway, good job! ~Lisa |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, you seem to be quite good at metaphors. lol i'm glad you find amusement in biology =) i think this is probably the first poem i've read here that mentions it. thanks for the interesting read. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
*shudders* memories of freshman year in biology man that was so long ago i'm getting old!! lol anyways great poem welcome to pasions please check your email for a special greeting. robin you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
this was very original, enjoyed it anya |
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Otaku Junior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 39Western Australia |
hey howzitgoin... Your poem was different and that's probably why i enjoyed it.. You've inspired me to write a poem about Calculus....thought you'd like to know.. Cheers |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I read this first :P its still awesome |
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Nazera29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34Connecticut |
thanks for all the kind words.... i feel very welcomed thanks kev and lis! *We are the hero in our own story* |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
Welcome, Welcome. Quite the unique first post. I liked it. Biology is such a pain in the ass unless you're doing nutrition and have a few...things wrong with you. Enjoy it here and don't forget to reply as well as post. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE I LOVE IT! |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! What a great first post!! Between this, and your other piece "Directions" that I just read, I'd say you've got a really unique style of writing. I almost didn't read this because of the title "Biology" (yuck, lol) but I'm glad I did. Keep posting!! Always, Nikki *~Fighting for your love~* |
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