Teen Poetry #5 |
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Directions |
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Nazera29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34Connecticut |
Directions to my heart: Start on route with the wink of your eye, Stay close, hug that shoulder, Sharp curves will call for your attention, For this journey you must be bolder. Take a left when reaching my smile, It has fooled a lesser man, and follow my breath to my lung, Now listen if you can. I know you will never ask for directions, which is good because few men have found the way. Just keep hugging the shoulders and hoping for signs, and listen to all that I say. Now the roads may get rougher soon and sharper curves will surface ahead. Make sure you’re careful on this road, You may slip on tears I have shed. You might feel me get weak in the knees, Damn things do at the worst times, And if a blushing appears on my cheeks, Please be gentle and kind. Now the matter of finding my heart, It is still a question to me, Sometimes it is in my chest, But at other times it breaks free. I’ve found it in the pits of my stomach, I’ve found it on paper, in a pen, And when I couldn’t find it within me? It was in the hands of unworthy men. So I have done the best that I can, To tell you where to go, Just remember once you find my heart, It’s been a while… so go slow! *We are the hero in our own story* |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Slippery when wet? >:O jk awesome jess who said that? *runs* |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Hey. This is really impressive. I never thought about writing anything about a subject like this, but what you've written is very creative... and good! ![]() hope you continue to write. (i can relate to this one as well) -raVen- |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Hey, this is good! A gentle reminder that a lot of people probably need to see. ![]() ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I really like this one. VERY creative. Interesting way to look at it. Great write. - Cody - |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I don't know what to say...It's a great write, I just don't know what to say...I see alot of the tings i think about in this poem. I, currently, am trying to get back with my ex. I guess everyone here @ Passions will soon learn of my new adventures with Justin Michael. LoL ![]() ~ Tamma Marian Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants? |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
aww Jess, I love these lines "I’ve found it in the pits of my stomach, I’ve found it on paper, in a pen, And when I couldn’t find it within me? It was in the hands of unworthy men." Amazing, I loved the poem, you are an extremely creative writer... ~Lis |
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Nazera29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34Connecticut |
wow, thanks alot everyone... i almost didnt put it up on here because i wrote this like 2 years ago and i constantly edit it and i havent been happy with it, like, ever... but to hear that you liked it is good... and kev- you are a freak!!! ![]() *We are the hero in our own story* |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
this was so inventivly written, a very clever idea, well done anya |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
I really like this, I only wish I could tell this guy I like this same thing ( with all credit as going to you ) Ah, if only so. Loved it! Ri To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Wow!! This was such a creative and cute idea, and I've never read anything quite like it!! I think you did an awesome job writing this and I don't know why you say that you're not happy with it!! Not only was it written beautifully, but it is soooo true!! Guys should have a manual on girls to refer to (maybe then they wouldn't mess up soo much!!) and this poem should be included in it!! I'm adding this piece to my library. Can't wait to see more! ![]() Always, Nikki *~Fighting for your love~* |
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