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LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-08-21 01:11 AM

Your words are pulsing through my head
Fail
They are tempting me with what I know I’ll do
Fail
Because I always do
Fail
And who am I to disappoint you
Fail
But why can’t I ever satisfy you
Fail
Because you are me, and I am never satisfied
Fail
Because I need to be critical
Fail
Because I need to succeed
Fail
Because it’s the only thing I’m good at
Fail
Because that’s me
*I don't know how poetically correct this is, it's more of a self pity-ing vent....you can just let it die if you want, some evil voice in my head is chanting "post post post" so I guess I should listen to him.

Nazera29
Junior Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 34
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-08-21 01:29 AM

li,
i like this alot, it is very honest and i love your constant fail fail fail in it... it gives it a rhythm. but i just want you to know that you are a great person, so tell yourself to ease up! you are the best!
love ya kid,
Jess

*We are the hero in our own story*

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

2 posted 2002-08-21 10:24 AM

'Because I need to succeed', I know that feeling! I get my exam results tommorow so thankyou for posting this, it's how I'm feeling right about now.
anya

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-08-22 12:54 PM

so anya, how'd you do on the exam??

~Lisa

And this little masochist, she's ready to confess

-Tori Amos

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2002-08-22 02:45 PM

I could relate to this really well, because I am defintely my worst critic. I liked the repitition of "fail" because it was almost as if I could hear the voice chanting in your head (well maybe there isnt a voice chanting in your head lol, but there is in mine). This was a great post!!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

5 posted 2002-08-22 04:07 PM

thanks for asking, I got 2 A*'s, 5 A's and two B's, however that probably doesn't mean much to you as I think you Americans have a very different exam system but I am over the moon just about now

Smiles and Cries
Junior Member

since 2002-08-23

Posts 16
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