Teen Poetry #5 |
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Cry |
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Jester Junior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 41The dark corners of your mind |
Cry out in fear Now also in wonder... Break free from your shell Now see the world in its entirety Not from within the cage you called love First fearing loneliness Then letting your curiosity drive you Wander out from the shadows of the past Enjoy the first glimpse of blinding sunlight Be free.... as you are now Do not forget to cry The tears free you from the pain Let them now be tears of independence Tears of joy Tears of simple freedom |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I like this alot, I thought you created some good images in this poem, the idea of love being a cage was very good anya |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was very well written and I'm so glad that you decided to share it with us!! Great imagery in here. Tears can truly equal many much more than just sadness. ![]() Always, Nikki *~Fighting for your love~* |
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