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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I'm going crazy, holding in all this anger. I can't deal withthis, my sanity is in danger. You don't see torment, behind my eyes. You don't hear the yelling, or the constant lies. All this hatred and pain, won't go away. It seems I'm destined, to always feel this way. My soul is turning cold, my heart is slowly dying. You don't feel my pain, or see the tears I'm crying... ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I like where your starting to take this poem, There is always alot that goes on behind the scenes, I would add to it a bit more though |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks kevin, its not finished, its like one of those ..to be continued..things lol  ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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Smiles and Cries Junior Member
since 2002-08-23
Posts 16Newrk De |
wow this is really good you really did a great job portraying the torture youre feeling i loved it Have u ever Loved somebody so much it makes u cry? Have u ever needed something so bad u cant sleep at night? Have u ever tried to find the words but |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
I really liked this, it reminded me a whole lot of what I am feeling right now. I love things that do that to me. <3 to ***** ( thats his name ) Ri <3 No guy is worth your tears, and when you find one that is, he won't make you cry <3 |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks, i'm working on the next thingy the um..the sequel yeah thats it lol thanks 4 the replies~later ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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