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Teen Poetry #5

Midnight Skies

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-08-17 10:24 PM

Can you see anything in that dark sky of yours?
There's not a single star out there tonight.
If you go out on my roof,
You can see for miles.
And my sky is always dotted with the brightest stars,
Too bad you're not here,
To share this midnight sky with me.
Can you see the moon from your window?
A tree branch obstructs my view.
Maybe you could tell me what it looks like tonight,
I could pretend that I'm by your side,
Sitting out on your roof,
Watching this beautiful midnight sky.

*~erin~*

"I've got nothing left to hide except for what's inside. I keep it all locked up in this prison we call love."-Sugarcult

[This message has been edited by StellarChica (08-18-2002 01:03 AM).]

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

1 posted 2002-08-18 07:36 PM

Very lovely poem. I love how the two subjects each have something the other doesn't, allowing them something to share and wish for. Oh, the romance

~Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-08-18 10:34 PM

Hey! I like!

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2002-08-19 02:08 PM

Wouldn't it be so perfect to share such a beautiful night view with someone whom you love? This poem was written beautifully! There was lots of imagery and emotion within it, and I definitely enjoyed it!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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