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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
Over I didn't really know what to call this.... Hope you like it though. ~*~Brittney~*~ I can't believe it's over After how hard we tried I don't believe that I'm ok with it After all the times you made me cry. I can't believe I'm over you Because I loved you for so long I don't believe I still care for you After all those times you did me wrong. I know I've probably hurt you But believe- you've hurt me too I'm sorry for everything I've done And the pain I may have put you through. You'll always be special to me Even if I don't love you anymore Because even though you hurt me, I won't forget the reasons i loved you before...... |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*sigh* I don't want to get cliche on you by telling you I've lived this poem, but I have. Just know that you're not alone, okay? If you ever want someone to talk to, you can email me  |
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Nazera29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34Connecticut |
i'm with skyfire... I also have lived through this.. but havent we all? i hope it helped to put it down on paper, and you did a great job of expressing alot of emotion in a short poem and it will get easier, i promise *We are the hero in our own story* |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Hey Britt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved your poem!It's was just sooo truthful!lol i think you have a VERY good abiltity to have reality in your poems... But Britt i have to say...If you DID actually over this guy...just remember "No guy is worth your tears,and the one who is won't make you cry!" That was my friends screen name but...i think it's true! I hope to read more Poetry from you..because you ARE very talented!BYES!!!!!!!!! ~*~Pollita~*~ |
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Xaphan Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 22 |
It's amazing. As much as we feel these feelings and write about them, we still never get tired of hearing them from someone else. No, it's not spite or anything like that, it's comfort. Comfort that we're not alone, comfort that at least there is _one person_ out there who feels the same thing. Great post |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yeah I hear ya here. Sometimes things are so confusing, and everything just makes you cry.  *sigh* Jenn |
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Otaku Junior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 39Western Australia |
take it easy.. let time wash this crappy time in your life away... |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
FANTASTIC! Ya know this is what my poems look like when I write an awesome poem so keep it up I am looking forward to reading alot more. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Aww this was great. I especially love how you say you won't forget the reasons you loved him before. I think when people breakup, all the good that was part of the relationship is clouded but all the bad things and we always forget about the little things they did/do that make us smile. There's a good side in any bad situation and I'm glad youre staying positive! Great piece here *Kiley **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
My, My, My...Must be the change of seasons... all these break-up poems sprouting up. My sis always blamed it ont he changing seasons...kinda like the full moon, makes everyone act differently. good poem ~ Tamma Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants? |
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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
Oh wow. Thanls for all the replys you guys! LOL, I'm glad you all liked this poem. Thanks again. Love: ~*~Brittney~*~ |
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