Teen Poetry #5 |
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Your running away |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI ![]() |
Your running away from me, Your running away from everything, You've made it so clear that im the one, You still tell me you love me, Even though you act like you hate me, You blame me for being controlling and inconsiderate, I try to change my ways once I realize, Now its too late, Now your the one that treats me like dirt, Now your the one that makes me hurt, What am I to do now? You pushing me into a pool of water, Watching me drown, We have been together way to long, Every bad thing you do to me... and i still hang on, I realized it was me at first, If it was to late ill never know, You run from me and you run from "us" Your friends a much better escape then to face the truth, Im sorry I love you and Im sorry I must say, Today is our day to find new "Friends" I want you to know that I will always love you, No matter who else you love, Ill always remember. Who remembers me? Probably no one but what the heck I came back with my problems and I hope u guys can help me. |
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Jester Junior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 41The dark corners of your mind |
I liked the structure of this. I thought it went very well with the mood of the poem. And it made me sad and also angry... thats a good thing because i was dragged right into the emotions of your writing. I am your God, will you kill me now or shall I be continually suicidal? |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I remember you!! Welcome back! I just went thru this (almost) exact situation...The guy I was dating (for 8 months), started distancing himself from me around our 7 month anniversary, and when he finally ended it...it was horrible... I've been away for awhile too, but then when he broke up with me (and Justin Michael came back into my life)...my poetry came back, too.. ![]() I've missed ya...email me so we can catch up ~ Tamma Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants? |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well right now im going through a tough time I was just told by my gf lastnight that ever since me and her have been "fighting" she has had feelings for another :'( so i dont know what to do. Try to work it out... Or what she says there not serious feelings but she says she has those because its the way I used to treat her. I just dont know anymore. |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey I remember you ![]() ![]() **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
Awww.... Definelty try and work it out. I'm sure whatever happens will be for the best. Good luck and thanks for the reply to my poem! ![]() Love: ~*~Brittney~*~ |
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