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knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2002-08-16 12:09 PM



Somewhere along the way,
we became lost on this path.
the beckon of light that outshone all,
was blown out by a careless breeze.

time stopped indefinitely for a matter of seconds,
regained only when it was too late to turn back.
a hand reached out and stole me away,
to a state of numbing confusion.

composed of a wretched loss.
compromising a soul to be damned.
I realized a moment already gone,
it was you that was lost, for I was always here.


eh.. I'm not sure if I've posted this before or not. I don't think I have but it was one of my older pieces. I found it while I was glancing through my old poetry notebook. hmm I think this was when my ex and I were in the middle of breaking up. oO

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

"Words are windows to the heart."

© Copyright 2002 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
paper doll
Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133
Floating on Uncertainty
1 posted 2002-08-16 10:23 PM


Well I haven't seen this one before Tiff so it's all new here.

I like the way you've written everything here. It reads through very well with such vivid descriptions. Sorry to hear that you were in so much pain though.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

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