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The Fall |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Halo of Lights Spectrum of life shows of Honoured might Existence of strive soul lost in pain Cinders of Ashed hope a Hero is Slain no longer can Cope the Fae begin to Dim as one once Believed Now, only in Hymn the World began to Grieve “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
Fabulous rhyme scheme you've got running through this. It seems unique but has got a touch of pure talent to it. I'm still waking up so the actual message is a little blurred in my head but rest assured I'll get it and be back to comment.  ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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