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Squirmy
New Member

since 2002-06-26

Posts 5

0 posted 2002-08-15 09:33 PM

Looking into the eyes of the innocent,
Looking into the uncertainty of my future
As I look up into the sky,
A giant galaxy of the unknown,
A darkness, which cannot be explained
There are limitless possibilities,
But limited imaginations
Endless stars, farther than the eye can see.
Much beyond what we don’t know
Much beyond what we care to believe
Out there may be a bigger and better place,
Waiting to be discovered,
Waiting to be explored,
There’s got to be more to this than I can see,
Limitless seas of knowledge
Beautiful in it’s own right
From the stars we can already see,
To the empty spaces,
Where I wish to be,
Someday we will know,
What is truly out there
What it all truly means
But until then Ill continue to dream
I’ll continue to wish for all,
That I’ll someday get to see..

[This message has been edited by Squirmy (08-15-2002 09:34 PM).]

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

1 posted 2002-08-15 10:13 PM

hey mr matt!
i remember this one, *Smiles* tis pretty. the only suggestion i really have is maybe to add more punctuation at the ends. i think it would really help the reader, otherwise i really liked this. yay for you! lol.
-Bergundy-

[This message has been edited by fearing-laughter (08-15-2002 10:14 PM).]

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2002-08-16 11:24 AM

This is the first I've read from you, so welcome to the blue pages.

Enjoy yourself.

I really enjoyed this piece..."From the stars we can already see,
To the empty spaces,
Where I wish to be . . ." I liked how you stuck yourself into all of these wonderings that can seem so distant sometimes. Hope to see more from you.

~Carly

"Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions."
~David Borenstein

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2002-08-16 10:35 PM

puff diddly dum, mr matt has more poems but no one replys to them for some reason. i don't understand why, reply to mr matt everyone! lol. oh, hi mr matt.
-bergundy-

"crack my head open, on your kitchen floor. to prove to you, that i have brains." -Alkaline Trio

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