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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113
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thursday8/15/02 the unhurried motions of feet, on a cold-damp pavement, the pitter patter of rain, and me w/this oversized black bag. furiously organizing my thoughts. you never answer anymore, everytime i call. you jerk! its your loss but the pain is mine to keep. I wish it was a friday...... *** * you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or |
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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113 |
ey, i just wrote this just now, dunno, i just have to let it out. God love sucks! i hate you christian. |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
yeah love sucks sometimes and i hope this venting helps you get it out your system anya |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
I just noticed your critique message - nice analogy.  One pet peeve I have with peoples writing is when they use abbreviations for their words. If you want it to retain some element of decency write the full word! Trust me, it'll give it a hell of a lot more. Love is a pain in the ass. You've got to go through the awful people to appreciate the nice ones when they come along. Thanks for posting. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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Otaku Junior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 39Western Australia |
nice and simple, with a message that we, as teenagers, can all relate to.. love does suck now and then...but when it doesn't suck..it's the greatest feeling in the world... ...trust me. |
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