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Teen Poetry #5

Pulchritude

Otaku
Junior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 39
Western Australia

0 posted 2002-08-15 06:16 AM

The unhurried ruffling of the
Waves below me...a

Rhythm of Serenity, a
Symphony of Love.

Warm, restful wind
Presses against my cheek, and

Surrounds my body with
Blissful Happiness.

*

As the World
Slowly unfolds its Beauty,

And as the endless beams of the Sun
Dissipate through the gentle clouds,

And as I stand along this cliff,
Hand to hand with the woman I love,

Silently, and affectionately,
I whisper to myself,

"It is a beautiful world...”

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

1 posted 2002-08-15 06:31 AM

nice to see such an uplifting piece of poetry, I think this poem is well constructed with a good message, both poems I have read of yours have impressed me
anya

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

2 posted 2002-08-15 07:00 AM

when ir read this poem, it reminds me so much of the sea, its like im there w/the salty air blowing, the poem is very soothing and well...really good, hope to see more of your work!

paper doll
Member

since 2002-08-04

Posts 133
Floating on Uncertainty

3 posted 2002-08-16 05:45 AM

This is lovely. A beautiful scene has been written about here and you really do come to realise the beauty of the world when you sit back and take a decent look at it.

Thanks for posting this. It's always good to see someone writing about something that isn't despondant.

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

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