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anawnda
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since 2002-07-26
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0 posted 2002-08-15 05:40 AM


"RAGE AGAINST LETTING GO"


A scab...
is slowly forming...
covering the cut I got
from loving you.


A fool,
I've been
& will always be
to keep picking
on the scab,
refusing to let go.

***


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Otaku
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since 2002-08-13
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1 posted 2002-08-15 06:49 AM


i strongly agree with the intent of your poem..

nice comparison with scabs...something we can all relate to..

good job!

Jenn Cirrincione
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2 posted 2002-08-15 01:39 PM


This was quite powerful.
Not to be "cliche" but I relate.

Jenn

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