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Allysa
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0 posted 2002-08-13 09:07 AM


She says it's my fault
that she ruined her reputation,
that she went with all the guys;
and when people found out
she decided to blame me.

She says it's my fault
that I'm the one who's the whore, not her,
that no one needed to know
what she was doing with my best friend's guy,
she decided to blame me.

I didn't make her kiss him,
I wasn't the one always undressing him with my eyes,
I didn't make her lay down next to him,
she ruined her own reputation
and she decided to blame me.

She says it's my fault
that I told my best friend
that her new guy was still fooling around with his old girl
and when the other girls found out and got mad
she decided to blame me.

She says it's my fault
though I'm not the one
who's been with eight guys in the same week,
I'm not the one who ruined my reputation
and still she blames me.


Yeah, I know this sucks, but I needed to get it out of my head.  The girl that this is about makes me so very angry.  BAH!

I've never seen you on the streets of this town, I've never seen you just hanging around, But you still tell me that you know me... ~Justin Sane

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1 posted 2002-08-13 09:13 AM


To be perfectly blunt, this girl sounds like an idiot. Although I haven't read your other works before, I gather that they may have been a bit stronger than this one.

Don't worry too much about this girl. They always come crawling back when they realise that you were in the right all along.

Good luck and thanks for sharing.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

Allysa
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2 posted 2002-08-13 09:22 AM


Thank you very much.  I honestly wasn't expecting to get any replies.  

She's evil.  Pure evil.  And she's moving to Jersey, where she can strike up another life as a whore.

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