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My New Freedom
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My New Freedom |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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With my new freedom comes flight the ability to soar into the night. Above and beyond the boundaries across the world over the trees. Imaginary perimeters now shattered my dreams are now all that matters. The ghosts faded like useless vapor blown away by my becoming burned like flash paper. I feel lighter no longer weighed down as I take flight high above the ground. I plan to travel far see the entire world as a woman of power not a scared little girl. I wish I'd known sooner how easy it could be freedom came when I overcame adversity. WhiteRose In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
Oooo I *love* the ending of this. Actually, the message throughout the entire piece is quite positive and essentially radiates through the screen. The way you've written it is fantastic. It's a subtle sort of power, not full blown which gives it a stronger base for appreciation. Thanks for posting this. I enjoyed the read.  ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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