Teen Poetry #5 |
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What Words |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon ![]() |
What words should we use to describe sorrow or a lack of hope for a brighter tomorrow. What would be right or really proper what definition would fit the description? In a world where people leave where destruction seems the fashion what word should we use in the place of passion? Where prose is wrong poetry is right and killing is easy when you can't fight? Tell me..what words? What words, should we write? WhiteRose |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
I LIKE THIS ONE, IT FLOWS REALLY WELL, AND I LOVE YOUR WORDS |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
yeah i really like this, well constructed and the whole poem worked really well anya |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
"What words should we use to describe sorrow or a lack of hope" I think this just sums up everything. I loved the whole poem, but this first part really struck me. I suppose because I know how true it is. I'm married to Mr.Metaphor. We make love everyday. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem i really liked it hope to see more from you. tks for the read. robin you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
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