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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-12 10:35 PM



What words should we use
to describe sorrow
or a lack of hope
for a brighter tomorrow.
What would be right
or really proper
what definition
would fit the description?
In a world
where people leave
where destruction
seems the fashion
what word should we use
in the place of passion?
Where prose is wrong
poetry is right
and killing is easy
when you can't fight?
Tell me..what words?
What words,
should we write?

WhiteRose

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layla
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1 posted 2002-08-12 11:04 PM


I LIKE THIS ONE, IT FLOWS REALLY WELL, AND I LOVE YOUR WORDS
anya
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since 2002-07-27
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London, UK
2 posted 2002-08-13 04:21 AM


yeah i really like this, well constructed and the whole poem worked really well
anya

Dark Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-08-13 03:19 PM


"What words should we use
to describe sorrow
or a lack of hope"

I think this just sums up everything. I loved the whole poem, but this first part really struck me. I suppose because I know how true it is.

I'm married to Mr.Metaphor. We make love everyday.

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4 posted 2002-08-14 04:25 AM


great poem i really liked it hope to see more from you. tks for the read.
robin

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