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I Never Knew
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I Never Knew |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I never knew That she was feeling so sad, I had no clue That I was holding her back. 'Cause she always smiled, Her eyes were so kind. I never knew... I never knew She felt alone in my arms. But this is true I never meant her no harm. Wanted her to breathe, To see her succeed. I never knew... I let her go...finally, She whispered in my ear: "Thank you so much". As she slipped outta my hand, I said: "You are welcome...Goodbye, good luck". Untill then I never knew Her uncolored rainbow was cause of me, As the moon climbs the starlight My pockets are filled with boxed memories. And now I know There was one happy ending, To this bold show There's also one heart mending. She's glad cause she's free, I'm the same old me. But know I know... Untill then I never knew... [This message has been edited by Hallucination (08-12-2002 09:00 AM).] |
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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
This was so sad! I always love all your work, no matter what style you write in.... Good job on this.  Luv Alwayz: ~*~Brittney~*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This one had me sighing. Unique kinds of losses make good poems... ~Carly "Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions." |
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Jester Junior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 41The dark corners of your mind |
A chill of understanding up my spine as i finished this... incredible understading. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i loved this one very well written. you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
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